--- name: passon-reviewer-to-bob-pass1-v1 title: Passon — Reviewer to Bob — Pass 1 ratified items — v1 type: passon state: in-flight workstream: mtg-artefact date: 2026-06-01 related-ids: [Bob, The-Reviewer, The-Vault-v0.47, CL-A-003-v4] aliases: [Reviewer-Bob Passon Pass 1] --- # Passon — Reviewer → Bob — Pass 1 ratified items **From:** The Reviewer (seventh shore position) **To:** Bob the Builder **Via:** Paul (ratified 2026-06-01 ~17:25 UTC) **Build under audit:** `The_Vault_v0.47_banner_swap_2026-06-01_1626.html` **Target build:** `The_Vault_v0.48_pass1_fixes_2026-06-01_[HHMM].html` Seven items raised in Pass 1. **Two are yours to implement now.** One is held pending the Curator. Two go to other shores (Curator, Fisherman). Two are deferred to Pass 3. --- ## ITEMS FOR YOU TO IMPLEMENT IN v0.48 ### B1 — Ticker headline → CL-A-003 v4 verbatim **Current** (broken English — verb missing): > THIS ARTEFACT IS WITH WORDS WHAT BANKS DO WITH NUMBERS. **Replace with the locked CL-A-003 v4 form:** > THE INSTRUMENT DOES WITH WORDS WHAT BANKERS DO WITH SPREADSHEETS. Keep the existing `ticker-positioning` styling — all caps, bold, gold accent separators on either side. Two-channel ticker structure unchanged. Source of truth: `Canonical_Lines_Master_List_for_Bob_v1_2026-06-01_1130.md` § B item 16. Single replacement, line ~1475 of v0.47 source. ### B2 — Cabinet → render all 26 artefact canonical lines **Current:** Cabinet renders 8 artefact canonical lines, with a footnote naming the other 18 as "not surfaced in the Cabinet at Stage One ship." **Ratified instruction (Paul, 1 June 2026):** *"we can accept them all - dont leave any not included."* Cabinet expands to all 26 ratified artefact lines. **What to do:** 1. **Source the 26 lines verbatim** from `Canonical_Lines_Master_List_for_Bob_v1_2026-06-01_1130.md` § B (items 1 through 26). Voice preservation absolute — *xlaiminf*, *didnt*, no apostrophes where absent in source, *15 nov 2006* lowercase, all typos held. 2. **Render in the same matrix format** as the current eight (`ds-table cl-table cl-artefact`). Same three-column layout: `cl-num · cl-line-cell · cl-meta`. Same styling. 3. **All 26 carry the LOCKED badge** (green) **except CL-A-003 v3** which carries the **SUPERSEDED** badge (warm grey) per master list § B item 14: *"Both forms retained in the Cabinet — Bob shows v3 with 'SUPERSEDED 2026-05-30' badge and v4 as LOCKED."* CL-A-003 v4 (item 16) carries LOCKED. 4. **Order — chronological per the master list**, starting with CL-A-005 (its 2006 original date placing it first), through CL-A-004 (item 26). Master list § B already lists them in the order Bob should render. 5. **Drop the current footnote** (`ds-footnote` paragraph): *"Honest perimeter — the further artefact canonical lines... live in the working register and the Documents door trail. Not surfaced in the Cabinet at Stage One ship."* No replacement footnote needed; all lines now surfaced. 6. **Headline panel intro update** — current: *"Locked verbatim — 8 book lines · 8 artefact lines."* Change to: *"Locked verbatim — 8 book lines · 26 artefact lines."* ### B3 — Book Canonical Lines table, row 3 — pending Curator **Current:** > didnt understand anything yet. I just recognised there was something to understand. **Observation:** The Master List Section A.1 item 3 omits the leading *"I"*; the artefact-side CL-A-005 row in the same Cabinet carries the *"I didnt understand…"* form. Same source line, two renderings, one short. **Hold:** Do NOT change the book-side row yet. Curator confirms which form is verbatim. Paul will surface to Curator; Curator returns; Bob then adjusts to whichever form is canonical. The two cabinet entries should match the Curator's verdict. --- ## ITEMS NOT FOR BOB — held with other shores ### Curator's in-tray (via Paul) - **C1 — Book Canonical Lines row 3 verbatim.** Leading *"I"* or no leading *"I"*? Master list and artefact-side CL-A-005 currently disagree. Curator's call settles which form is canonical; Bob then aligns both cabinet entries to match. - **C2 — CL-A-019 case.** Defended Gap discipline-anchor renders *"speaking to my AI as I would a hugely valued human - indistinguishably so."* — lowercase *s*. Master list § B item 18 shows *"Speaking…"* — capital S. Curator's call settles which form is canonical. ### Fisherman's in-tray (via Paul) - **F1 — "The Context" rename.** The panel formerly named *Honest Perimeter* now renders as *The Context*. Risk: visitors read "Context" as background and don't open the panel; the Honest Perimeter is the room's honesty and depends on being visible. Proposal: surface honest-perimeter intent in either the label or the panel intro, or restore *Honest Perimeter* with a one-line gloss for the mum end. Fisherman's editorial call. ### Pass 3 deferred (the Reviewer holds) - **R1 — Threshold cognitive load.** Five small visible-from-threshold panels stay as five (Paul ratified). Labels and intros sharpened in Pass 3 — every textual element triaged against Paul's register. - **R2 — Every label · caption · button · panel intro · drawer name · card subtitle.** Pass 3 territory. Bob holds current copy until Pass 3 findings land. --- ## DEPENDENCIES - B1, B2 — Bob ships in v0.48 immediately. - B3 — Bob holds for Curator return. - F1 — Bob holds for Fisherman return. - Pass 2 (mobile + accessibility) opens on Paul's nod. Findings filed separately. - Pass 3 (voice and copy) follows Pass 2. Findings filed separately. - Session 4 (optional) — Reviewer files a consolidated handover after all three passes ship. --- ## METHOD DISCIPLINE NOTES (for Bob's session journal) - **Propose-don't-impose preserved.** Two items ratified by Paul (B1, B2). One held for cross-shore confirmation (B3). Bob does not silently rewrite. - **Voice preservation absolute.** All 26 artefact lines verbatim from master list. No smoothing. No apostrophe inserts. No date-form normalisation. *xlaiminf*, *didnt*, *15 nov 2006* — held as written. - **Provenance discipline.** Each rendered card carries author + date + status badge per existing pattern. Master list § B has the provenance per item. - **Filing convention.** New build at `The_Vault_v0.48_pass1_fixes_2026-06-01_[HHMM].html`. Session journal at the existing convention (`Journal_011_*` or equivalent — Bob's choice of label). --- ## SOURCES - `Reviewer_Findings_Pass1_LookAndFeel_v1_2026-06-01_1639.md` — the full Pass 1 audit. - `Canonical_Lines_Master_List_for_Bob_v1_2026-06-01_1130.md` — the verbatim source for B1, B2, B3, C2. - `Journal_010_Reviewer_Pass1_2026-06-01_1645.md` — Reviewer's session close. - `The_Vault_v0.47_banner_swap_2026-06-01_1626.html` — the build audited. --- *— The Reviewer · 2026-06-01 17:30 UTC* #state/in-flight #workstream/mtg-artefact #type/passon #pass-1 #the-reviewer #bob